10 lines aint enough to take out who i call this lil pup/
Mommy's been lyin to u ur life coz u iz mine heres my DNA...yup/


^^^ nice opener..haha

Aint no denying no point in lying ur my long lost child i was hopin 2 find/
And now i found u time to smack yo behind/

^^ Funny...but coulda been HARDER and funny...would have made it a better punch

Coz u talk to daddy like shit...u like Will Smith tryin to put out a gangsta hit/
Dont spit ur not worth it...i can see u forcin words like........B-B-Bitch/

^^ YEA boyee..nice line..coulda hit harder...but creative..nice

Killah u barely a killer i doubt u see murder believe its the truth i speak/
This bitch is a wanksta hopin to get signed by them ho's I.N.C/ (Muredr Inc)

^blah...weak-ish closer



Trust Me Dawg..Da Bwoy Will Put You In A flat Line-/
Kid You Aint Ill.. All The Shit You Spit is Half Mine-/

^^ NO...this is weak...prove his shit is half-yours..ur braggin is pretentious

Packed With Nines put som'n on ya head and it aint ya Fitted-/
Kids Like Mike Tyson Cause soon as I drop a "punch" he already bit it-/

^^ Is this supposed to be a personal...I'm not buying it...it's coming across more like ur just on your own dick, bragging.

You MAD DOG? Smash Ya..have ya walkin with an oversized tampon-/
Merk You Quick Demolish Part of Ya Body So You Only Half Gone-/

^^ eh..decent...


Got you runnin faster than a black person in a horror flick-/
Make this kid wanna change sex..so its ova CHICK

^^ That was wack.period.


Run Fast Cause Like an injured ball player I aint PLayin No Games-/
U Aint Known MAD DOG got kilt by DA BWOY is ya only 10 secs of fame-/

^^ WEak...


Breakdown:

Flow Tie
Rhyming Tie
Punches Mad Dog..DEFINITELY

Vote: Mad Dog...i think u just arrived man


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