this was one of the weaker battles that i have seen from havok............both of you need to elevate alot.........

havok.......you need to not space your bars out like that......it makes your struture messed and your flow choppy and hard to read.......you need to work on rewording your punches so they hit better.....and BOTH OF YOU NEED TO DO PERSONALS.....they help out alot...p[c

v/Ketch..

hit this up
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=111538