finished wit this shit, fuck it blak, take a while...
...cuz ten to one chances...
ur verse is gonna have quotes from 8 mile.../

^^ weak closer...and I'm not feeling your structure...shit looks like Poetry


Let's Get It Crackin
Jus ‘Avert-To-Lose’ I'm Sinistar Nobody Feelin Ya Once Blak ‘Murks-Crews’!
Dont Test My ‘Words-Dude’ I Smash ‘Herds-Through’! .. And Turn A "Faggit" Into A ‘Herb-Two’! ..


^^^ Just start ur verse already...damn...lol


Leave Kids ‘Folded-&-Finished’! .. Turn This Bitch Into A ‘Bold-Witness ..
Test Me? And Get Slugs To ‘Show up on our Porch’ like ‘Jehova-Witness ..

^^ pretty decent opener

Destroy Ya Face! He Can’t ‘keep-up’ Like His Pants Too ‘Hard-at-the-Waste ..
His Left Beat-Up..So He ‘Blew off Baron Davis’ To Put a ‘Guard-to-his-Face ..


Decent^^^^^^


Only "Accomplishment" you gunna achive this battle is make it 12 for you loss..
have on your knees by the end beging please like Tony Danza on who the boss..


^^^^^ decent...

ur verse wasn't all that great, but way more cnsistent with punches than ACC.

Vote: Flash