breakdown:


scarface87:

A Girl?, She Don't Even Think That Battlin Is Serious
I'm Here With Someone That Every Half An Hour Be Havin Her Period
^^good opener hard punch 7/10
So What Made You Rap In This, Missy Ellliott?
I'ma Beat You So Quick It's Like Me Cummin In Ya Tits
^^does not rhyme 2/10
I'm Here Dissin You When I Should've Been Datin You
Now My Linez Got You Sliced Up Like What A Wu-Tang Member'll Do
^^good punch decent flow 5/10
I Put Less Blows To Da Flow When I Battle A Female
Cauze We Be Beauty And Da Beast And I Know They Don't Like To Break A Nail
^^bad 2nd line and stretched 4/10
I'm Scarface, So Say Hello To My Lil' Friend Then Flee
And You A Bita, Cauze That Girl From "Making Da Band" Is What You're Pretendin To Be
^^1st line ok 2nd line stretched 3/10
I'm Goin Below Da Max Linez Cauze I Know You Had Enough
Cauze I'm Like A Cop Da Way Ya Whole Style Just Been Cuffed
^^good meta and punch 6/10
A Girl To Beat Me Gotta Be A Classik Joke
So Run On To Ya Borfriend, I'm Now A Person In Ya List That You Gotta Provoke.
^^another stretched line bad finisher 3/10

overall: 34/70

missfiyagurl:

my silencers carry ya voice, desert eagles target - u - on the menu
but nigga ya got no choice, its set in ya like some fuckin’ mildew
^^good opener decent punch 6/10
then it explode, kamikaze separatin’ your frontal from your back
ya organs erode, ya fam stunned watchin’ like a terrorist attacked
^^hott loving the structure 8/10
gave him time fa breath, close ya Mouth-wash and use Scope
too shallow for my depth,(lol) I hold up “bars” he drops the soap
^^best bar in battle 10/10
blood drips from ya crown, use your spit with surrenda flag to mop it
this queen hold ya down, he look up to me like Lord of Rings do Hobbits
^^good punch not too hott 5/10
this ya formal invite, I bring ya ass mo’ SCARs, you FACE your ill- fate
8-7 dynamites ignite, breakthrough WINDOWS programmed like BILL GATES
^^hott ass personal gurl got skill 8/10
nigga tryna blaze, drop ya shit! I swallow and spit it betta than Minotaur
passin’ out grades, give ya A(ss) new meaning fa group-study seminars
^^lol another hott punch 7/10
you full of ciphers, I throw curves straight and leave ya ass bombarded
hold shit like diapers, he punches his own chest like he fuckin’ retarded
^^lmao @ punches his own chest 8/10

overall: 52/70

vote: missfiyagurl.........hott verse from her...scarface u still need to elevate work on structure and more personals and punches


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