***Man Down***
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IP:
to toxic: you spit mad lines yo. i almost didn't want to read it when i clicked onthis battle. anyway nice ass punches and multiples. you should tighten your structure up alot, b/c its like readin an essay dawg. overall nice verse.
darrk: your verse was weak, you need to tighten your punches and personals up. stop talkin about your self so much and maybe you can win. when you ge t tot he level where you're really good you can boast on yourself. aight step it up son.
vote=toxic
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"Don't put your mouth in motion before you put your mind in gear."

THIS RAP SHIT IS NOT A GAME CRAZE
I GOT THE ARTILERY THAT AH RING YAH HEAD 4 DAYS
SO ONLY COME AT ME PROPER IF YOU DON'T WANT TO RAP LIKE MACE
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