Whatz up wit dat opener Nightrida(from lloyd bankz)
^^^and that would have been your best line too.
but you did come wit somethin original through the rest of it. no hard punchez, no multiez, mettaz, just a plain verse
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better multiez and nice punchez but you could work on ya Struckure and mettaz
Bitch, when I post shit, its potent evil even ya mans knowin/
cuz when he try to slip in his dick, he notice ya glands swollen/
^^^nice opener wit some good multiez
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