aaight this was close, but ima break it down like this....

Zero- seems like you got the structure down, but your lines were kinda short...and it seemed like a repeating flow over and over....you should try to develop you meta more...but nice drop..

Fat- your opener was def, better...your structure was better as well, didnt have the multi's i was looken for tho...nice drop

Vote = Fat

**I got an audio battle that needs some REAL votes, its -O- Vs SenseR......the link wouldnt work so I couldnt post it

Nice battle tho

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