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Old 05-19-04, 04:56 PM   #15
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King Solo...Ill kill you and ya whole crew roster
Have ya brains on the street resemblin pasta
Okay...6/10
This nigga couldnt blow even if he was breakin wind
Couldn't rob a win from me even if he was breakin in
Okay punch.....6/10
you whack...better make ya pen make amends
Or Ill leave ya as the only 18 year old wearin Depends
Decent....lil bit better than ur others....7/10
Solo King of losses....no one can top that
I'd murder ya wit only one bar even fought back
Come on...u can do better....5/10
And its no competition...Ill easily murder ya in reptition
Heed my premonitions...you better treat my flow like superstitions
No punch....4/10

Verse Score - 28/50 = 56%

Aight your verse was just a lil bet less than decent....u only had one DECENT bar...couple okay ones....and two bad ones....u used useless multi's....didnt have any good meta's....or personals....just werk on your whole game....

You won’t see my destructiveness comin cuz I always ‘conceal-my-mines’
No wonder they call u tha Black Thief, bitch always tryin to ‘steal-my-lines’
Good personal and punch...kinda played though....8/10
I’ll snap ure neck have ure head spinnin like the fuckin exorcist bitch
Bust ure nose givin u double vision so u won’t know which King is which
Okay...but exorcist is played also....7/10
This King is bout to ‘blast-out’ beat u so bad ure wack ass will be ‘quittin-rap’
Call this damn bitch ‘ass-mouth’ cuz he got a PHD in always ‘spittin-crap’
Good punch....8/10
Wack MC’s I detest so takin u out of the rap game is my current quest
*CLICK* *BOOM* my 12-Gauge flow leaves a fuckin hole in ure chest
No real punch.....5/10
U scared I’m ‘detectin-chills’ I accepted this battle fuckin ‘expectin-skillz’
Like a drug I be ‘injectin-killz’ u shud leave and stick to ‘collectin-billz’
Okay....6/10

Verse Score - 34/50 = 68%

Okay your verse def had better punches than his....work on your meta's....and personals....dont use 'these' around your werds to emphasize shit.....we no a punch when we see one....jus good verse and keep elevatin....

Vote - King


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