sten - okay a couple of your bars were hot...but your closer and the pads bar was def not....u cant say 'this closer' or stuff like that in ur closer....but good flow and multi's....no really good personals in ur verse.....okay meta's.....jus werk on using personals and better meta's....give ur verse a 6.9/10....

triple - u had way better meta's....lose the " " around ur werds....no personals....so werk on that....better punches.....same on the flow....but ur verse was better.....u had more complexity and sustainment.....good spit....give ur verse a 8.3/10.....

Vote - triple

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