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Old 05-19-04, 05:23 PM   #5
corky
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You try n make me elivate//
ur speakin to me like im a mate//
i aint no mate speakin to me lyk dis conjers up hate and wid dis hate im bound to get Irrate!// Whateva u say will become ur fate// She was ready but u was always late//


ur flow is messed up in those bars........rule of thumb make ur bars more even
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