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Old 05-19-04, 05:40 PM   #5
DON
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nice battle i felt like the skill level was average

tstorm-i think u had a stronger opener and a good rhyme scheme u jus need work on ways to deliever ur punches

gavin-i think u need work on ur rhyme sceme cause it was too much of the same most of the way through and also work on harder punches cause most of those lines seemed like fillers but it was good u jus need some work

vote-tstorm
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