View Single Post
Old 05-19-04, 05:47 PM   #11
Jacket
Flyweight
 
Posts: 137
IP:

va- i thought you had good flow and creative rhymes. "cuz i sprayed his body into particles as if it wer tha 4th of july./ his blood shootin up like fire works, body parts fallen from tha sky"...this was a nice punch..very creative.

popa doc- you did alright, but your structure was a little off. keep workin..

vote: va
please vote on my shit..."Gip battle" vote for yo man jacket