The usage of your wordz.

Best chance you got is dying cuz that’s the only way I’ma be R.I.P. (Ripped)
His good rhymes would never “stick” if his rhymes embodied his avy

^^Where is the rhyme pattern.

His rhymes would never leave a trail of fire if he was dancing with the devil
If Rhyming was like the ocean then this bitch’s rhymes is below sea level


^^^I dont see any creativity in there. Basics................


blah!!!

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