V A i kill u every fuckin way put a knife to ya neck, fill ya with lead wit my tech, leavin holes in ya chest, bombin ya like a fuckin math test/
This was my favorite verse from Croz... I like the bombin similie it made a good punchline... Your structure could use some work overall and a little more effort into your punchlines but I think you have serious potential

these dice arent white, cuz snake eyes turn red wen their bouts to strike./
this bitch, is straight fearin tha bite of a sider at night, he be havin daddy checkin tha closet .. makin sure .:VA:. aint occuping tha site.
I liked this closer here - again your structure could use a little help, but your verse flowed alot better than Croz'z and I think your punches were better worked out and you had a lot of metas and similies with some multi-syllable rhymes in there so I liked it more... In this battle Ima have to give the vote to V.A-- Good spit fellas good luck in the future.

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