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Old 05-19-04, 09:06 PM   #7
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murda- u did good for a newb but u shoudlnt have started wit jokah cause hes way above ur level right now. u need to hit harder and work on rhyming jus keep practice

jokah-ur stuff was good and u hit hard had 2 minor hits then hit hard again it kept me readin good style plus ur rhyme scheme was good

my vote-jokah