Alright now that my vote here counts, Ill offer an explained vote...

Gavin your punchlines were weak... Perfect example wtf does feeding a rabbit have to do with being able to write a good rhyme... or the Fizz-E line...Wtf was the punchline? Fizzy? it doesn't pop-- its not a line thats going to make the reader go..Holy Shit that was some cruel shit...Try to work on that and you will improve greatly.

Murderous... I think its really creative the way you did that isht down the left side of your verse... It think you had a couple punchlines here that were pretty nice and you had a more than decent flow so I definately give you the win just cuz I think you have a deeper grasp of this than your opponent does... Good luck to both of you in the future and please vote on this battle if you haven't already and I will return the favor in another of your battles.... Vote: Goes to Murderous http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124935

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