Originally Posted by lyrical_flamez

murda I wrote: this was your first battle & that was aight...in my
opinion not that real punches the structure was aight.... vocab
not that many big words in the verse.....flow was average.....

Da Jokah: u had cool punches my personal favourite is:

"u gon start beef like pac n biggie
pull out da glock and make u dance da jiggie"

flow was real good.....vocab not many big words......structure
was real good so overall you was real good

my vote goes to: Da Jokah