Flow, you gotta elevate hommie. Low vocab and elementary rap. No punches, multi's nothin. Ya structure was aight I guess..Just keep tryin'.
ATMOSPHERE had the better punches and personals her structure was pretty deicent and just just had the all around better verse.
Vote ATMOSPHERE
Return tha favor plz and vote in my battle!!
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