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Old 05-20-04, 05:16 AM   #16
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Your crew don’t mean shit, even a mouse rolls with a click
Cheney must be Ptolemaic, coz your world revolves around Dick\

^^6 funny...clever


Dissolving your spit, split you in half and leave you to die-section
Going down for attempted Murder, so you best revise Methods


^^ slick wordplay...punch not that hard


You couldn’t cum with hot shit if your intestines attached to your balls
Getting slapped till u fall, now you’re back’s at the wall

^^ blah

Gradually graduated, smoke you to leave you like your avatar
Battling wack newbies in Front Lines shows how hard you are
I’ll carve you up, but I won’t take the pussy way out like a C-Section
Relieve stresses, like a Chinese family of four, you need les-sons


^^^^ pretty weak...not a good punch...closer is just eh


Soft pussy cat . . Fuck nine lives I`ll beat you down with one
Dont deserve to view my lines & where the FUCK have you came from?

^^ decent opener


Put you in plasters bitch , I’ve mastered this & fuck`d up you’re game.
Embarrass you so much , next week you`ll sign in with a different name.

^^ not hard...but decent

I taught you structure but you suck , so I know you fairly well.
You might have got better . . but beating me?! – is a fairy tell . .
Reconginze , I wont let ya rise . . get good or let ya progress.
Fuck shouting & slang , I`ll murder this fake & wont settle for less.
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^^ decent closer


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