Yeah.. Fresh MC had that defeat line which was semi decent. However, in order to elevate, you should try upping the wordplay... for instance having your foot in your mouth means something. So try to use that one line, than saying "so now you can taste da feet" in the next line... instead of just "cram your toes in your line" which is not only a bit obvious for the wordplay, but also not a great punch. Just off the top of my head.. you could do something like

"this kid predicting victory, but i got his ass beat
now he taking back his words.. so i got him tasting da feet"

^ that's not great, but at least it's a little cooler in my eyes.

anyway, v/ fresh.

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