pro-rican.. you gotta work on getting more coherency to your verse... your setups and punches have nothing to do with each other. also, all your wordplay is really generic, and you aren't making it original. "you couldn't rap a sandwhich" was ok, nothing else was. don't talk about how great you are unless you are pulling some great punches in the rest of you verse, which you weren't.

accomp.. kinda obvious you wrote this in 5 minutes, the closer was ok, rest was mostly blah, but enough to take this one.

v/ accomp

hit back the battle in my sig man. peace.

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