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Old 05-20-04, 12:25 PM   #8
LyricalMethod
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Pro-Rican i like your verse alot.accomplishment i liked yours too but your lyrics through my train of thought off. i couldn't connect your shit together ,so i didn't get most of yah shit.

Pro-Rican's best lines: "chaotic when i spit on these ones and twos/
astronimical is the level difference between me and you/ /
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO"
overall performance 7/10

accomplishment's best lines: "i'm accomplished, still unable to tell what its like without fans...
becasue didnt even call me out, and still get bitchslapped with both hands.../"

as you can see both had nice punch lines^^^^. but Pro-Rican had consistency throughout his whole verse. better structure and lyrics. accomplishment structure was not great and he didn't spit hard all the way through his verse. consistency is the key.

vote=Pro-Rican
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