Flyweight
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IP:
I dont know if it wuz just where im from that causes me to pronounce wordz different but 4/9 lines did not rhyme with anything. put some personalz in and some mettaz if you can think of any.
[ Quote ]my rhymes is more creamier then krispy Kreams/ [ Unquote ]
^^^not a good line to use in a battle
not a good verse at all.
Nice opener but dropped off a lil bit as you went on. but still better punchez and multiez and all.
i liked your first two barz and after that it wuz not that good. but you were good enough to win.
vote Black smith
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