The Epitome Of Greatness
From: NY ... Born And Raised |
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IP:
this was a hott topical....
breakdown:
re$tricted:
you had a really really good verse....the consistency of it was really good...you stayed on topic well...wordplay was good...vocabulary was top notch...perfect flow and structure...the setup of each line how it repeated 3 times in a row was really hott.. brought more to this topical battle...overall you had a really good drop..
overall: 8.5/10
L.I
I think you started off pretty bad...i wasnt feeling the beginning that much...but then you broke through it and created a very good topical verse....i think you stayed on topic a little more than re$tricted did..."she sighs and walked away"...i think that set off the hott part of your verse...from then on it was really consistent good vocab and wordplay...flow was straight...structure was a little off in places...but overall you had a good drop also
overall:8/10
vote: re$tricted...i think he won this battle wasnt as creative but it was very consistent and well thought out...L.I u had a good verse also but the first couple bars made you lose my vote...this was really close but re$tricted pulled ahead by a little bit
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i would appreciate it if someone dropped a vote on me Vs. KiNg SoLo...its in EFL
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