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Old 05-20-04, 04:31 PM   #11
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yea dis was a nice topical both had diffrent stylez of doin it but i was feelin both

king-nice drop stayed on ur topic nice story nice flow vocab was off but yo shit stayed consistant thru out the verse

bestline-u had alot but dis 1 stands

I thought they had my friend in custody; turns out they got the wrong guy
And my friend just says “Forget it man we got off, let’s just let him fry.”

nicee

worsteline-none juss vocab lacked but good enuff

~R~rated-nice drop vocab was excellent stayed on topic flow was thumbs up consistant flow

bestline-My Arms Transform Into Crucifix's With Sacred Subscriptures..
The Oppresion, I Was The Cause Of Everything In Those Pictures..


nice

worsteline-none eirthing on point

r rated-overall verse gets a 9.1/10
king-overall verse gets a 8.9/10

winner-re$tricted
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