Wanna i starting reading it
I thought what the fuck
HE`s biting lines from Coolio . .But you must have just catch phrased it
I would say you need alot of work on you`re VOCAB........
You`re rhyme scheme is too basic

to many gyals are skets,but u jst cnt tell/
it cud be amy,katie or maybe michelle/
^ Yo whats this gotta do with you`re heart . .

It`s Aight i guess since you`re new im go with 6/10 . .
Just need the vocab fixed peace..

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