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Old 05-20-04, 07:39 PM   #11
$MOKESKREEN
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Aight...honest Vote.
I'mma have to go with Met on this on. Killa ya first 4 lines didn't even rhyme whats up wit that? Punches and personals was a little weak and you need to elevate ya vocab some. Met-A-4 u could elevate a little too, ya punches were marginal but I liked ya flow a little better.

Vote Met-A-4

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