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IP:
strategies - wow most didnt rhyme....only decent punch was the elevation one.....work on using metas.....and personals.....dont stretch ur lines.....elevate on ur ordplay and structure....dont use 'around' your]8 words....its annoying.....verse score is 2/10....get a rhyme scheme!!!.....
gip - at least u had a rhyme scheme....and not as many stretched lines.....wordplay needs work....use better personals.....turn the ish u say into punchs....not say oh u rep 313....thats wack......use metas....but u got this cuz u rhymed....thats the basis of a battle....verse score is 2.3/10....
BOTH NEED TO ELEVATE ALOT
Vote- gip
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