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Old 05-21-04, 02:52 AM   #5
Triple_N
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Good Battle Shawties, we gotta stop the female on female violence its getting out of control nowadays
LadyLyrical.....that was a decent drop ma', you had some decent punchlines an alot of metas, personals were weak an inconsistent tho', your flow was a little off due to the fact you strectched your lines, wasn't very complex at all, wordplay was decent, a few multies some were forced.
Flow: 5/10
Metas: 6/10
Multies: 6/10
Punches: 5/10
Consistancy: 5/10
Wordplay: 7/10
Feel: 4/10
Complexity: 4/10
Overall: 42/80

Will a peer....good verse ma', your had great vocab use throughout, I see you read a lot, you had good punchlines, you didn't really have any personals, an you had a few solid multies, flow was tight throughout, an you were pretty consistent wit your punches, wordplay was good, very complex verse, good drop

Flow: 7/10
Metas: 6/10
Multies: 5/10
Punches: 7/10
Consistency: 6/10
Wordplay: 6/10
Feel: 5/10
Complexity: 8/10
Overall: 50/80
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