Blah, not even close. jacket totally merked this other guy. it's like this...

"This Kid Admits He Never Gets Ass All He Do Is Look At Internet Pics When he Jack-et.. 1
And Like Afleck Lickin Dessert Topping Off J-Lo's Backside You Gettin Ya Ass Whipped.. 2"

^ that is terrible. The first line is a bullshit personal, and so damn obvious to boot. Might as well have done something nicer... like "this rapper used his sex life as his name" or something... your line is WAY too stretched and sucks. the second one is bad as well, the meta is too damn obvious, so by the time you got to "your ass is whipped" I wasn't blown away by it. Again, way too stretched, not even a great concept.

Jacket, your verse was nothing special but was pretty decent, nice structure and flow and your punches were ok. The wording is pretty decent, and it was an enjoyable read.

v/ jacket

give an honest vote on my battle, the link is in my sig (lil-flip).

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