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Old 05-21-04, 06:14 AM   #8
King Solo
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Listen up fine mind coz some home truths about to be thrown/
Stop callin me out baby i know u thinkin ur high chairs ur throne/
5...aight line playa, pretty basic vocab, needs more work.
U about to be dealt perhaps the biggest hit ever blown/
Coz mommy's takin u out ur seat...u've been de-throned/ (See line 2)
8...workin wit the second line, that shit was funny!!!
Y u keep talkin like u the hype...no-1's feelin u aite/
People jus battle u to up their wins and look good on this site/
6...nice punch, again basic vocab tho.
U the oldest newbie...they call u the wack ol'G wins u sustained 3/
They lost count at ur loss record...so they started at 15/
4...didnt really like it cuz the rhymin was off.
I find u an embarassment to battle but i jus can't turn down the offer/
Coz part 3 over now...like a run in wit Pamela Lee...i floored ya/
6...aight closer, pretty weak overall spit dawg!!


finemind's... gonna retaliate to all the ball shit you said/
the bull shits fake, i bet you just copied and pasted this from an rb mate /
5...structure off, pretty played line tho!!
my lyrics cure the metal disabled... put your brainwaves streched out... like ropes/
im busting shit your sayin... makin you foolishly unprepared/
1...wtf??? structure off again, it didnt rhyme and work on ure spellin.
i'll make you preassure and sweat... like your a mad dog walking through the serhara dessert/
im no fuckin g... im a canabal, waiting to eat you up... like hanable lecture/
1...wtf??? Where is the rhyme???
my lines convuse your own lyrics getting twisted in mine/
tangled never untangled, tighted, never unbreakabale/
1...NO RHYME!!!
i got lyrical talent thats always on the league... and it covers you up like you don't even exist/
the ring bell has dinged, rocky-balboa the italain -stallion wins/
3...ok there was one rhyme there in the last line but still...BLEH!!

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Mad Dog - 29/50......Pretty weak spit, check out the tutorials before battlin again playa, cuz u need a lotta elevatin!!
Fine Mind - 11/50...WTF??? Ure shit was just plain wack, just work on actually rhymin ure lines before u think about anythin else!!!
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