where the fuck u get that name from?...40caliberhitz/
only way ya spit sick...is coz u infested wit syphliss/

^^ decent opener..but aids/syphillis lines are kinda played out

you cudnt fuck wit ma flows if i was paid as your whore/
ma brain clicks n seals ya defeat before ya can move ya jaw/


^^^ decent wordplay..ok punch


ima rip u up,put u through a shredder,leave u 2 freeze in this english weather/
bat ur wack back up,strap u up,wish u luck..hope next time u do beta/

^^^decent closer...

Verse coulda had harder punches...some wordplay/punches were played...

28/40




You tha type of nigga to make, a gay man straight--
And Im tha type of nigga to make, an insane man safe--

^^ That's wack...exactly where is the punch or diss at him?

P.S. Do not categorize your lines by section...opener/closer...etc...that's corny...jus let people read the verse

You punk ass should kno my punches and flows are made of Terror--
Ill shatter your dreams while you sleepin, in a box made of mirrors--

^^ Nice meta and imagery

You more gay and queerer than faggits discussing interior designs--
You got inferior lines, you just cant see em' cuz you appear to be blind--


^^ Ok..enough with the gay references...geesh..decent punch tho


You second rate to me, your sumtin these members would hate--
Ill cut you a lesser fate, when you see these rhymes, youll die in 7 days--


^^^ I like dat...haha

30/40

Vote: 40...better metas/punches


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