I’m just your average guy, I have always took life as it comes
But then my world was rocked like a used up set of drums
The new guy on the block arrived moving into the street next door
Then that night we hooked up right outside the liquor store

^^ good story telling so far

I See Shadows That Scream and Move When My Eyes Are Closed..
Problems That Are Undefined, Not Even My Psychotrist Knows..
My Brain Waves Shift In A Zig-Zagged Directional Form..
Since I Was Born My Reality Has Been Torn In A Devilish Core..

^^ Nice descriptive imagery...

I see this is a battle between Story telling (King) and Imagery (Res)

hmm...let's see who'll win


I thought they had my friend in custody; turns out they got the wrong guy
And my friend just says “Forget it man we got off, let’s just let him fry.”
But that is not the kind of person I am, I can not be forced to live a lie
So it looks like my friends going down for murder and me as his ally.

^^ nice lyrics in terms of abstract imagery...good story telling


The Demons Were Released Cause Satan Thought I Was Beyond Mental..
Knew From My Sins God Would No More Towards Me Be Sentimental..
For My Sins I Was Paralized From The Hip Down and Turned Blind..
So Now These Pills Will Have To Help Me Control My Troubled Mind..

^^ once again...very nice imagery

DAMN...this is tough..it's hard to vote because both are excellent in their own rite


hmm

Flow RES
RHyming Tie
Vocab Res
Lyrics Tie

So i have to go with RES.


1...premium on imagery and he took it there