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Old 05-21-04, 11:57 AM   #10
Action
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Flow:
Personals: Lyric
Punches: Lyric
Complexity: Neither
Wordplay: Neither
Creativity: Lyric
Structure: Lyric

Aight, The Battle Was Weak To Be Truthful. Gavin Had No Structure, Flow, Punches, Or Anything. His Verse Was A Mess. Gavin Try To At Least Bar Off Ya Verse So cats Can follow It When The Readin it, Feel Me.
Lyric's Was Aight, But Yo, Try To Even Ya Lines Out A Little. Cuz You Had A Couple Long Lines And Then A Whole Bunch Of Short Ones. The Flow Is Always Better If The Lines Are Similar In Length.
Also, Both Yall Need To Have More Punches, Cuz That's What Makes The Other Guy Look Dumb. Both Yall Keep Workin.


VOTE: LYRICELSOLJA
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