the brealdown......

action's best lines: "This Man Jack Never Packin A Gat, He Like A Straight Bitches Sex Drawer, Lackin A Strap.. 9"
"This Man's Been Slain And I Take Picture's Of My Victim's So Stop And Smile Sucker.. 12"

nice flow and punches. i like your struture, real strong and you were confident with your punches. you came hard but your verse was mad long dawg. nice multiples and lyrics though. im being mad honest dawg so don't take it to heart.

overall perormance: 6/10

jacket's best lines:"Yo In this battle boy, im the one gettin Action
Cuz you so damn bad you get votes in fractions.
Im gonna plaster my rhymes up on all over yo head.
So every time think of a winnin, you’ll think of me instead."

nice flow dawg. you came hard dawg. i like that. your sturcture was very good dawg for a nb. your verse was compact but you ahad nice punches lil youngin.

overall performance:7/10

i know alot of ppl wo't agree with me after this but its okay. erase it if you want to.
my verdict is: jacket gets my vote b/c i think he came harder. action i didn't think your verse was all that b/c you loaded up only on punches and you didn't have any real complexity to yur verse. not all of your punches were grat but b/c of the surroundin punches it makde your verse a lil better. jacket had a lil verse but it was compact with nice punches and a nice flow. action try not to put so many punches in your verses. don't take this to heart son

vote=jacket

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