yo this was pretty close both had some ok parts and some parts that fukin sucked
opener and closer: jacket
flow:jacket
vocab:action
multis: none
personalls: tie
vote:jacket

sorry action i think u really needed to shorten ya lines up a bit and work on the wordplay iight,.............

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