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Old 05-21-04, 01:17 PM   #16
kEtCh~22
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Posts: 220
From: 2~1~5
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dawg you should never fuckin talk, you should be like mr. bean.
Cuz yo game so fuckin stale, you need some listerene
And yo game is like pebbles, while im rollin them boulders
And yo shit is flakin so bad, you need some Head and Shoulders.
And I am standin up here packin all my punches and kicks.
but I see you at the park, packin lunches and dicks.
Dawg I think you need a tip, cuz I got all the fuckin trix.
you should start a fuckin battle at the Special Olympics.
And you still wouldn’t win, cuz you just no good at rappin.
And I bet a guy could even beat ya speakin Pig Latin!

First of all^^^that is simple..straight up..i can't even believe this battle is 4-4..thats newb shit..no metas..no complexity in rhyme scheme..punches not creative...not close..1

He Only Cum Hard When He Grabs Cock, Sorry But I Don't Care If Ya Whole Family Offended.. 5
Hit U Wit MASS Shots And Best Believe I Aint Talkin Bout The School Camby Attended.. 6
if u know ya NCAA ball that is sick & CREATIVE!

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