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Old 05-21-04, 02:48 PM   #7
Lyriclesolja
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Wow nice battle verse demo you blew this cat out of the water...damn. Nevadat make your verse closer togeather and stop that spacing shit and make every line rhyme cause it dont make sence if it doesent an mean......

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