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Old 05-21-04, 03:07 PM   #14
Shadows edge
retired.
 
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His verse was garbage, and the avatar is a dude handling burgers. Kinda ruined the punch for me, although it was still pretty nice the first time. not the second time. rest of verse = crap. no real nice punches, no wordplay or nice metas.

enygma had a couple nice concepts and some good punches. the blue print line.. i really liked the concept and wanted the punch to be nice, but the wording let it down. it was nice, but could have really won this easily for you. then you kinda grasped with your first card wordplay diss:

"
I’m known for the jack of hearts…..I’ll take you life with my pen
And you could be the king of clubs……with a knife in your head"

^ boo-urns.

"
And what the fuck did you Blueprint? There's no need to conceal it
A crew with Kingz and a Jack., no wonder they're easy to deal wit"

^ far better.

your closer was pretty decent.

enygma wins hands down for better wordplay and punches.
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