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Old 05-21-04, 04:52 PM   #13
JSmoove
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From: Texas
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Ketch 22 had better structure and flow, although his opener was WEAK and WACK. I like that Nintendo line and the one with Ali writtin' in cursive. Good battle.

Omega your flow was fragmented, and needs a little work to read better. Your opener was ok. Closer was nice, and your nicest punch was "This fool was neva ready for this bout/He could'nt spit notin hardcore iif put pebbles in his mouth" You had nice punch too, but flow is what i was lookin' for. Other than that ya'lls even.

win: Ketch22