DaCROZofHB- nice job, u had some good vocab. ur flow was a little different, but i liked it. ur structure needs a little work. u could also get a few more metas in there. But u did good.
fuckdat- u did ok, not bad, but it was too basic i think. u had da flow and structure. but it was way to plain and boring, especialy towards da end. Work on ur creativity a bit, but u didnt do dat bad bro.

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