This was a pretty good topical

Restricted.....I liked your consistency throughout the verse, you stayed on topic throughout the whole verse, had good wordplay, painted a clear picture of the story, used your multies very well throughout none of them were forced a big plus, it was a solid all round drop

L.I......you had a good drop also, but you lost with your opening bars, you first couple of lines completely killed your verse, once you got going you verse was hot, an if you didn't messed up the opening you coulda won, cuz you told a superb story, an had great multies use, but I can't give it to you for the simple fact that your opening bars killed the consistency of your verse
Vote: Restricted

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