fine mind: well personally I think you could do a lot better if it rhymed more ummm....the structure was on point I flowed aight with it....I feel
no really good punches that hit hard vocab was aight...

HELLonEARTH: umm shit basically the structure was good...flow was good....
vocab was good also & the punches hit harder than fine mind my favourite
line was

Like "Nerds" watchin "porn", Ya just plain "whack"//
Like humpin "plumbers" in the job, you be on "Crack"//

my vote goes to: HELLonEARTH

take a look at my second battle & if u could take a little bit of yo time
and do a honest vote AIGHT!

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125133

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