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IP:
Well i thought this was pretty weak, not your best for sure...
Im voting for Discharge here, because i thought his was overall better,
Heres the break down
20 - you flowed alright, but your opener...
I aint gonna lie, I bet ur drop will be hot//
but ur time is now up like an expired shot clock//
Doesn't Rhyme. I didn't see any good punches at all, this needs to be elevated.
DISCHARGE - You had good flow, good structure, you had some good punches.
Your best line -
say your crew cant be stoped ive beat evry 1 in ur crew..
u want honest truth? that crew is bout as-wack-as-you...
That was pretty good....
OVERALL - Alright, I thought it was weak from both of you, You both didn't follow the rules, 10 bars, not 10 lines. Discharge u took like 20 mins to spit that.... in a 10 - 15 min time limit, but that doesnt really matter. Discharge came better with punches, and thats what wins these battles..
Vote - Discharge
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