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Old 05-21-04, 09:13 PM   #18
C.March
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Well i thought this was pretty weak, not your best for sure...
Im voting for Discharge here, because i thought his was overall better,

Heres the break down

20 - you flowed alright, but your opener...

I aint gonna lie, I bet ur drop will be hot//
but ur time is now up like an expired shot clock//

Doesn't Rhyme. I didn't see any good punches at all, this needs to be elevated.

DISCHARGE - You had good flow, good structure, you had some good punches.

Your best line -
say your crew cant be stoped ive beat evry 1 in ur crew..
u want honest truth? that crew is bout as-wack-as-you...

That was pretty good....

OVERALL - Alright, I thought it was weak from both of you, You both didn't follow the rules, 10 bars, not 10 lines. Discharge u took like 20 mins to spit that.... in a 10 - 15 min time limit, but that doesnt really matter. Discharge came better with punches, and thats what wins these battles..

Vote - Discharge