My Rap-Tactics, flow like Porno-Graphics/too hott da handle/
Droppin bombs while swingin axes/Muthafuckas call me Mickey Mantle/
try to shake me off like an Earthquake drop, dawg i just dont rattle/
I spit lyrical fury, homie u cant contest dis/
Got ya throwin up SHIT, lookin anarexxic/
Rhymes hittin yo so fuckin crisp/ leave ya paralyzed, dats y u have to text dis/
Forgot protection for ya weak ass erection, I'm bound da choke ya/
Cut ya insides wide open like a C-Section, spttin venom like a fuckin King Cobra/
Me n dis rap game go together like Peanut Butter and Jelly/
you fake, yo SHIT just dont MIX like 30 year olds and R Kelly/

I thought your last 5 or 6 lines were pretty good- You had a little problem with structuring but your punches hit, and you got a couple good ones in- decent wordplay all in all i'd say your elevatin nicely... Good Verse

yo bitch, aight
your shit is wack and flows like a bathroom leak,
take dis advice/rip your chords out find a tall building - leap/
My fav line outta this whole verse of yours... I think if all of your verses were witty like this one I would have given you the battle easy..
my shit is too hard for niggaz to handle
dats why i battle bitches and wack artists reppin mickey mantle/
when i spit my flow give bitches orgasm better than rampant rabbit
i feedin my cock to yo bitch like banana wit sherbit/
This is where i stopped feelin it... rabbit and sherbit rhyme in the last syllable but it was obvious you were going for a multi, the punch was o.k but not stellar
motherfuckin you should watch coming rappin wit nuthin on me/
all you got skills for is syhillis gonarea and hiv/
your skills just aint embedded into your mind
ill mash you head into food for mine.

I think u started strong and kinda fell off... For whatever reason youre gonna need to come 100% for the whole verse next time without that drop off and You'll get urself some V's... Good verse though for new to RB.

My Vote- DaCroz

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