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Old 05-21-04, 09:45 PM   #23
Know-Gimix
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I liked the Croz's Opener..it was good
and if my shit dont hit you hard enough, and ur still able to breathe/
ill make sho that i take yo legs out, got u lookin like Christopher Reeves
That was also pretty decent too... Good punch- all in all decent flow, the structure is a little shaky but not a bad verse.

Scarface.... I wasn't really feelin your verse... The punches weren't really direct and the verse had alot of filler in it...I think you should work a little on making your punches hit harder and upping your content to be able to compete with some of the more experienced kids... Vote DaCroz
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