daclassic um not your best or even close to what u can do but your opener was pretty nice good wordplay decent punch and your closer not to good punch didnt really connect to me it was ight though the rest of your verse was around or below average not really any solid punchs after that opener rhyme scheme was nice though no need to say what u did wrong u already know what it is

deadlyv your opener was pretty nice good shit worded better an it woulda been real sick your closerwas nice as well pretty creative and good wordplay dont think many more peopleare gonna catch that shit though and the rest of your verse was tight at first 4 lines then didnt feel much of it till the last 4 lines those lines were all sick though nice punchs nice verse be more consitant next time though

vote deadly visions

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