You Get Murdered Quick Like A Crip walkin In A Blood Area-
You Aint Hard..Like the BoogyMan Aint No ONe scared Of Ya-
Decent Opener, flowed well had a punch couple of similies
Dawg You Wack Kids Gettin Sacked Like A Bad QuarterBack-
u Ebony? Shoot errythin up sept ur legs so you only a quarter black-
Good wordplay, I think maybe a little punctuation woulda made this easier to read
I Can See Ya Ugliness Like Michael Jackson On WebCam-
Merkin You Without Breakin A Sweat Like A Kid With A Headband-
egh, o.k
Da Roads Come To An End Like That Kat Beenie Man-
Kid Perormed at a gay club now he braggin like DID YOU SEE ME MAN-
lol, this was funny- Good punchline, good similie in the first line
You Aint Real Like That Fat Santa Clause Bitch-
You Gettin Devoured quick like a fat kid infront of a Sandwhich-
lol, two solid bars in a row- very good use of similies and wordplay
Like Bat Man And Robbin Im here to save the day-
From Bad Katz like you..Rhymes'll take You Away-
Aint Buffy But This "Bitin" Bitch Is Gettin Slayed-
Like A Tru PLaya.. Ya Rhymes Are All Used N' Played-
Fuck Ma-Ku..I will Make You...SucK My Dick-
After This Battle You Aint Comin Back Like A Magician with bad Magic Tricks
These lines were more basic than the first few, but all in all it was a good verse, I really liked a few bars.

Maku
It’s like Iraq, I kill bystanders if they between us in war//
Your softness is unwanted, like a limp penis in porn//
This I think was a better punchline... It hit harder- flowed just as well
Callin me spreewell, how I’m strangiling you//
If you WERE buffy, you couldn’t slay me, cuz I’m angel to you//
stranglin and angel dont rhyme when I speak- This was a decent attempt at playing off his verse but I think you coulda came a little harder.
It’s an enhanced brain, this lame has came faced with/
Assimilate y’all name, then cause detonation of gay statements*//
This displays the more intense vocab you used in the verse, decent wordplay I like the way you set this punchline up.
unrapeable inmate…He ain’t bustin this back//
Him winnin this one? That’s Lyrical destruction of fact//
Yeah- This verse isn't as witty, but It definately pops - Your punchlines take a little more thought to appreciate which makes it seem more elevated to me, I like it.
You’re a joke so I’m laughin at you//
Rap battery Leaves this bastard as inactive as half of his crew//
Good use of Personal, The setup could've used some work but good nonetheless.
You wish you was titanic, but that ship has been left//
My aim’ll make you fade away, from shots that ‘knick’ you to death**//
I make sure, that this hit you’ll detect//
I could take pictures of ya group pride, but still never “picture you repped”/
The knick you to death was decent, kinda basic but good... I liked the punchlines in these last two bars... I think you just came with a little more vocab, a little deeper punches, and just a little harder... I give this Battle to Maku

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