This Guy Wanted To Battle Set It Up And Got Offline...
You Define Whackness.. I Think You Should Resign...
egh, weak opener, it flows fine and all but no punches wordplay metas similies
Why Didnt You Decline.. Now Your Just A No Show..
Ima PRO.. Your Style Licks.. Your Never Gun To Grow..
Same problem here as before.. Your structure so far is good but nothing that wins a battle
My Flow Is Smashin Bricks, And Its Playin Mean Tricks...
Once This Battle Is Over My Wins Gun Change To 26...
You know what Im going to say here....
Only 8 Lines Is What It Took To Kill Ya, Its Taragic...
Gun Fill Ya Up Wit Holes Like I Just Did To Black Magik...
Weak Closer here... This just didn't have any punchlines, any personal disses, anything to make me consider giving you the victory in this besides the fact that it flowed and had a nice structure.

wanna be hot to deaf? ill put da ~flame in your ear~//
u beatin Em? u drunk too many canz of ~canadien Beer~// ( drunk)
Decent Opener, The punchline wasn't amazing but there was some good wordplay and it had some creativity
spitz so hot, son , IM known for ~boiling foes~//
cuz ur "shit" wouldnt "flow" even in ~toilet bowlz~//
Good wordplay on the second line, but its kind of a used concept
u scared to post a bar, cuz even ur momz ~know u would hide~//
have ur name under "depth"(death)and i aint talkin bout a ~scuba dive~//
This was a good bar, The depth wordplay and punchline was very creative I think this might have been the dopest line i've read in a little while... Good job here
u aint a killa, just a whore dat love ~flossin wit wigz~//
shut da fuck up and add a 1 for a ~loss on ur sig~//
Yeah this closer wasn't super strong, but this verse as a whole had a good use of wordplay, punchlines, etc... I enjoyed reading it- which is most important... The only suggestions I can make is to work on your structure a little to try and get your syllable count closer on each line... And keep trying to get those killer wordplay and punchline references in their and you will continue to earn many a vote... My vote- Nasty Em

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