Listen...You talk Alot Keep Addin Exagerations/
This faggot hate...so he chit chattin' blabbin' debatin'/
Egh, kinda weak opener... coulda used some wordplay or a good punchline
Youza Snitch nigga..But keep addin you information/
Imma Infiltrate and set you to fire like imflammation/
weak, very basic rhyming going on here no punches or wordplay.
Hey chap you hatin'..get holes like excavagation/
and each slug come wit force like a word in exclamation/
Theres some wordplay in this-- this bar isn't too bad rather decent.
imma expectation..you more like and infestation/
i dont need no explation to exterminate ya/
egh, nothing special here
its cake Im creatin' statements thats fascinatin/
and let the words rip you like process of laceration/
egh basic... the punchline is basic and all it is is a couple of lines that rhyme.


damn wat should i key?
i spit "Exclusive" "rapz" its like my nick name should be known as~ "Bar" :Code"~// ( think about it)
And u couldnt "(Ex)-Terminate" Me if u even had a ~Divorce wit Arnold~//( think)
Decent couple of lines... You incorporated some wordplay, and combined it to form a creative punchline
Ima Dangerouz Cat, stay armed, 45' az a ~Palm Tool~//
if ima "snitch,"i'll bet "50 cents" dat you rock Tee's dat spell out "~Ja Rule(s)~"// ( think whores)
Decent, I know where you were tryin to go here- kinda played but decent.
Why dis fagat posted first? iz He in a ~hurry to get murked~?//
cuz "SlugZ" will Attract to you, like you was Forever ~"Buried in da dirt~"//
good wordplay...i feel it ( think)
should be lucky, u on da same thread as da godd,Em ~spittin barz~//
little "fagat", thinkz he'z good cuz he wrote about his "Lifestyle" to ~"stick it Hard"~// (look at his sig)- Good personal... This is what wins battles but its like noone hears me.
u cant be dat wack, son, so shoot me wit a ~betta rap~//
u beating Nasty Em, iz as common as ur name bitch ~"Neva Dat"~// ( its a wrap bitch!)- Good closer... I think ur verses are good man..good wordplay decent punches you win this battle no problem..Goodjob...1

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